First submission to this site. Not very good I know, not only am I not very good, but my scanner butchered it as well. Either way, the idea of it was cool. Based loosely on Tim Burton's art style. The logs holding him up got smudged so their detail was lost, his head looks a bit like a baseball, the lines were much darker on paper, scanner kinda lightened everything. Anyway those are the flaws I am aware of, let me know if you see any more, I am trying to improve myself here
Ok, ill be brutaly honest if you want so ... So, well, you can crearly see Burton's influence, wich at the begining gives it a +1 point, (cuz i love Burtons work, we will talk about that later) His head does look a little like a baseball ball, though, the thing that makes it a little unreal i believe are maybe the eyes, they seem a little expression-less to me... the composition and clothes are good, interesting and well balanced, although, i think it could add more interes to the viewers if you could add now and then a little comment on the composition
I just meant that you could do exactly what you did on your other drawings lol, but of course this was the first pic i saw, so i didn't knew you were actually doing it
haha this is nice, made me laugh with that title (do not be offended by this,)
you know, burtons a nice one, and this totally reflects somethin about him. now just a little comment about th sticks holding him, they should have a notable difference in height, that might add som drama t th pic. Or...thats what i think Oo anyways its t nice
do you plan on colorin this one? that would rock
Haha, yeah, I don't like naming things, it was kind of a joke, I am not offended. As for the sticks, yeah they are a little off perspective, if ever I am bored enough to fix that I will do and repost this one. As for the coloring idea, I have a dislike for color, unless its black and white + one item colored, that looks cool, like only coloring the blood, for instance. It's an interesting idea, I might look into it some time.
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you know, burtons a nice one, and this totally reflects somethin about him. now just a little comment about th sticks holding him, they should have a notable difference in height, that might add som drama t th pic. Or...thats what i think Oo anyways its t nice
do you plan on colorin this one? that would rock
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